Sunday, March 15, 2009

Post Happy Hour Haiku


Warm sun on my face

Stevie Ray plays just for me

It’s bliss… of a sort.


Yeah... like that. Even considering the 5-7-5 structure is SO limiting...

(OK, Doc... I just HAD to try it.)

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5 comments:

  1. Christina RN LMT15 March, 2009 18:46

    Very good to know
    This day's been blissful for you
    Wish you many more!

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  2. Marsosudiro15 March, 2009 20:14

    Water with limits?
    From hydrant’s wide mouth, a stream
    Squeezed through hose, a jet

    I'm sure you're teasing about the limiting, but I still had to write a response.

    For the record, I think my piece is clunkiest haiku I've ever seen. But that's a nice segue to mentioning this for any of your readers who don't click through to the comments at Doc's post:

    http://xkcd.com/554/

    XKCD dude rocks! (As do also the Christians at KCXD.com, apparently.)

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  3. skywind15 March, 2009 21:23

    Oh, it prompted "we're sorry, this video is no longer avaiable.": (
    Health is the Greatest Happiness
    The World at The Present

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  4. Doc16 March, 2009 00:01

    Riffs right as rain ring
    True when words fail, and naked's
    A sport worth good jazz.

    But abstract artistes
    Will never be so cool as
    Cool Daddy-o Buck.

    Takes tunes and whiskey
    Smooth, his cigars and beer dark,
    Infinite good taste.

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  5. Buck16 March, 2009 11:43

    Christina and Phil: You guys rock! And I didn't think yours was clunky at all, Phil. Nicely, done!

    Skywind: It plays for me, still. Re-loading the page helps sometimes.

    Doc: I surrender!! (and thanks for the masterful exhibition, not to mention the GOOD words!) :D

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Just be polite... that's all I ask.

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